请高手帮我修改我的四级作文,On a Harmonious Dormitory LifeNowadays,it is common that four or more students live in one dormitory.They will live together for several years,a long period.Therefore,sometimes the harmony might be broken inevi

请高手帮我修改我的四级作文,On a Harmonious Dormitory LifeNowadays,it is common that four or more students live in one dormitory.They will live together for several years,a long period.Therefore,sometimes the harmony might be broken inevi
请高手帮我修改我的四级作文,
On a Harmonious Dormitory Life
Nowadays,it is common that four or more students live in one dormitory.They will live together for several years,a long period.Therefore,sometimes the harmony might be broken inevitably.
Nevertheless,a harminous dormitory life is of great necessity.To begin with,harmony in dormitory can improve the relationship between the roommates.They will be more willing to help each other.What's more,it also has a positive impace on the students' study.With less troubles happening in the dormitory,they are able to concentrate on studying.Moreover,it contributes to the culture on campus.It is in civilized campus that students can enjoy a comfortable life.
All in all ,we should attach great significance to a harmonious dormitory life.From my perspective,some effective measures must be taken.For instance,we should get rid of our bad habits.Don't always disturb others and learn to tolerate them.In conclusion,we should take the plunge to build a harmonious dormitory life.
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请高手帮我修改我的四级作文,On a Harmonious Dormitory LifeNowadays,it is common that four or more students live in one dormitory.They will live together for several years,a long period.Therefore,sometimes the harmony might be broken inevi
总体而言写得不错,开头可以这么写 it's a real phenomenon that four or more students.；
therefore,sometimes the harmony .和后面的nvertheless因果关系不明确,你可以这样写：though the harmony might be interrupted inebitably ,a harminous dormitory life is of great necessity.另外has a positive impact on 有笔误；learn how to tolerate them.最后可以用一个倒装句：only in this way can we enjoy.

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恩，作文不错。打106.4