求英语学霸帮忙看看这篇文章有没有语法错误QAAAAAA【在线等!The education of Code of conduct in China and Foreign countriesSome researches show that many people in china prefer the education of code of conduct in some foreign coun

求英语学霸帮忙看看这篇文章有没有语法错误QAAAAAA【在线等!The education of Code of conduct in China and Foreign countriesSome researches show that many people in china prefer the education of code of conduct in some foreign coun
求英语学霸帮忙看看这篇文章有没有语法错误QAAAAAA【在线等!
The education of Code of conduct in China and Foreign countries
Some researches show that many people in china prefer the education of code of conduct in some foreign countries such as America and Britain.They think that the education of the code of conduct in those countries is more suitable and specific.And they think those rules in china is hard for middle school students to understand.These opinions and true in a way,but we can’t conclude from these opinions that the education of code of conduct in China is useless.I think our middle school students can understand these rules thoroughly and obey these rules strictly.
In my opinion,we can read the regulations in the foreign countries for reference and help us understand our rules better.

求英语学霸帮忙看看这篇文章有没有语法错误QAAAAAA【在线等!The education of Code of conduct in China and Foreign countriesSome researches show that many people in china prefer the education of code of conduct in some foreign coun
什么是education of Code of conduct?意思含糊
Code of Conduct 的意思很重,请看如下：
A code of conduct is a set of rules outlining the responsibilities of,or proper practices for,an individual,party or organization.Related concepts include ethical,honor and moral codes,as well as halachic and religious laws.
如果只想表达“道德教育”的意思,建议改作moral education
第二句They think that the education of the code of conduct in those countries is more suitable and specific.Suitable for what?How specific?这是议论文,立论不足.

They think that the education of the code of conduct in those countries is more suitable and specific.

the education of the code of conduct用复数形式，后边用are，因为各国应该不同

And they think those rules in china is hard for middle school students to understand.

1. and一般不放在句号之后可以换成meanwhile

2. hard换成difficult比较好

In my opinion, we can read the regulations in the foreign countries for reference and help us understand our rules better.

for换成as references