改一篇英语作文（指出语法错误或常识性错误（低级错误））Dear Sir\Madam, I want to join the summer camp.I think it's good for improving my English.Because I can hear and speak real English.I'm good at writing but I don't do

改一篇英语作文（指出语法错误或常识性错误（低级错误））Dear Sir\Madam, I want to join the summer camp.I think it's good for improving my English.Because I can hear and speak real English.I'm good at writing but I don't do
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Dear Sir\Madam,
I want to join the summer camp.I think it's good for improving my English.Because I can hear and speak real English.I'm good at writing but I don't do well in speaking.But I like speaking it very much.I will do some housework in the American family.I hope I can live in a friendly family.The people will friendly to me.I think I can learn many things by this summer camp.
Yours,
Wang Gang

改一篇英语作文（指出语法错误或常识性错误（低级错误））Dear Sir\Madam, I want to join the summer camp.I think it's good for improving my English.Because I can hear and speak real English.I'm good at writing but I don't do
it's good for improving ---it's good for me to improve
real English---Authentic English地道的英语
The people will friendly to me---The people will be friendly to me
learn many things by this summer camp--- learn many things through this summer camp.

Dear Sir\Madam,
I want to join the summer camp.I think it's good for me to improve my English.Because I can hear and speak authentic English there.I'm good at writing but I don't do well in sp...

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Dear Sir\Madam,
I want to join the summer camp.I think it's good for me to improve my English.Because I can hear and speak authentic English there.I'm good at writing but I don't do well in speaking.Despite it I like speaking it very much.In addition，I will do some housework in the American family.I hope I can live in a family.whose member will be friendly to me.I think I can learn many things through this summer camp.
Yours,
Wang Gang
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