英语翻译that she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents,who might now cite her professed malleability as they make their case that incentives to change,not equal rights,are what we need.make their case that incentives to change 怎么

英语翻译that she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents,who might now cite her professed malleability as they make their case that incentives to change,not equal rights,are what we need.make their case that incentives to change 怎么
英语翻译
that she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents,who might now cite her professed malleability as they make their case that incentives to change,not equal rights,are what we need.
make their case that incentives to change 怎么分析句法和翻译?

英语翻译that she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents,who might now cite her professed malleability as they make their case that incentives to change,not equal rights,are what we need.make their case that incentives to change 怎么
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你可以简单的了解下lady gaga 她曾呼吁参议院投票废除歧视同性恋者的“不问不说”政策.
我自己翻译的：
人们抱怨除此之外,她还把一根木棍（武器）给了我们的反对者.这些人,现在也许正在引用她的公开声明作为他们要改变的理由,这种变革不是需要平等权利,更不是我们想要的.
make their case that incentives to change
其中that 为同位语从句,说明case 的内容,case即,现存的情况（对同性恋的“不闻不问”政策）
稍微查阅了一点东西,所以有点慢～希望能看懂.如果有问题可以继续探讨

That引导的是一个主语从军句。Who修饰Opponent。最后的are是谓语。what we need是宾语从句。那个翻译是：让他们的case有动机去改变

that she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents not equal rights are what we need是主句
she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents是主语从句what we need是表语从句who might now cite her prof...

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that she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents not equal rights are what we need是主句
she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents是主语从句what we need是表语从句who might now cite her professed malleability as they make their case that incentives to change是定语从句修饰 opponents
as they make their case that incentives to change正如他们给这些案件那样的动机去改变

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that incentives to change 是case的定语从句 incentive是动词，刺激、激励的意思

that she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents, who might now cite her professed malleability as they make their case that incentives to change, not equal rights, are what we need.
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that she had furthermore handed a cudgel to our opponents, who might now cite her professed malleability as they make their case that incentives to change, not equal rights, are what we need.
直译文
。。。。（假如）当我们的对手阐明他们的观点：我们现在所需求的是这些变革的动机，而不是平等的权力，那么，她可能此时会援引她自己所声称的那种易受外界影响的顺应性，进而（真的）把（她手中的）这根根棍棒交给了我们的对手解释啊。
解释：1. 好像是混合式虚拟语气结构， 看各个谓语动词的时态进行比较会知道的 。
2 。 【估计原文的 that 前面可能有英语的字词，不过提问者没有写完全。】
3 。 as they make their case that incentives to change, not equal rights, are what we need. 这可以看着是时间状语从句也可以看作条件状语从句。这个从句中的主语是“they （代替前面的ouropponents）”， 谓语是“ make their case ”（作出他们的观点），后面的 that incentives to change, not equal rights, are what we need 是表示前面“case”的同位语。说明“case”的内容，直译意思是：这些变革的动机 ，不是平等的权力 ，是我们现在所需求的东西。
【说明：由于不知道原文的语境，只有直译了，具体个别词的词义请原译者根据文章的原文语境确定正确的含义（例如我下面所说的“棍棒”的具体意思），我作为局外人只有帮助你理解句子的权利没有把具体每个词的具体涵义和细节都说清楚的必要，所以才写上直译文）。 如果原文没有写全，或者就是这样的完整一句话也告诉我，以便我继续修改译文。注意完整一句英语的含义啊，如果有，要正确的打印出来。】
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