帮我看看有多少语法错误Generation gapDid you find that sometimes you couldn’t get along well with our parents?Nowadays we live a busy life.Parents and children have little time to communicate with each other and they can't communicate wit

帮我看看有多少语法错误Generation gapDid you find that sometimes you couldn’t get along well with our parents?Nowadays we live a busy life.Parents and children have little time to communicate with each other and they can't communicate wit
帮我看看有多少语法错误
Generation gap
Did you find that sometimes you couldn’t get along well with our parents?
Nowadays we live a busy life.Parents and children have little time to communicate with each other and they can't communicate with each other successfully yet.Parents dislike their children think and do ,while children complain that their parents cant understand them.As you know,parents would consider their child to be a unreasonable kid.Why?Maybe this is so-called generation gap.
In my opinion ,there are two reasons for generation gap .Firstly,parents are busy earning more money,they are ignorant of importance of communication .Parents and children are often lack of communication.This would lead to a series of problem.For example ,they always cling to their own opinion and deny the opposite easily.
Secondly ,because of the generations have the different grown periods,parents and children have different realization.
The different generations should respect each other and try to understand each other through communication maybe this is the best method to narrow generation gap.

帮我看看有多少语法错误Generation gapDid you find that sometimes you couldn’t get along well with our parents?Nowadays we live a busy life.Parents and children have little time to communicate with each other and they can't communicate wit
1.全文时态没有保持一致.第一句DID改为Do,could改为can
2.主宾不对称.还是第一句,既然是do you,后面也应该是your parents
3.重复累赘,第二段第二句have little time to communicate with each other and they can't communicate with each other successfully yet.and 后面改为 and they can't handle that successfully yet
4.中文式翻译.你是想表达“父母不认同孩子的想和做”但这样表达不好Parents dislike their children think and do,而是Parents find it different to agree with children’s way of thinking and doing things
5.人称不对应,第二段的总体语气既然是we,那么那句as you know 改为as we know 正如我们所知
错误还蛮多的,建议楼主先自己把接下来的改改,我下次再来看,有事先走了,没看完.

数字是行数，第几行第几行。
1. Did = Do ; couldn't = can't ; our = your ;
3. yet = too ;
4. dislike 和 their 之间加 what ; while 和 children 之间加 their 或 the ;
5. child = children ; 去掉 would 和 a ;
6. ...

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数字是行数，第几行第几行。
1. Did = Do ; couldn't = can't ; our = your ;
3. yet = too ;
4. dislike 和 their 之间加 what ; while 和 children 之间加 their 或 the ;
5. child = children ; 去掉 would 和 a ;
6. 去掉 kid ; so-called 前加 the ;
7. gap 后加 to happen ;
8. earning = making ; they 前加 so ; importance 前加 the ;
9. 去掉 would ，lead = leads ; problem = problems ;
10. opinion = opinions ;
11. 全句重写：Secondly, because they all grew up in different periods, parents and children have different views on life.
14. maybe 前加逗号和 and ，generation 前加 the 。

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