It was a Saturday evening 改错…………谢谢十处.It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the football.With am important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both wanted to do well at the match .Sudde

It was a Saturday evening 改错…………谢谢十处.It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the football.With am important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both wanted to do well at the match .Sudde
It was a Saturday evening 改错…………谢谢
十处.It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the football.With am important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both wanted to do well at the match .Suddenly,one of my friends fell over.I was shocked and run towards him.I saw blood on his head.Everyone felt scary.After a while,we took him to the nearest hospitals.I also called his family to tell them about the accident.When we were sitting and waiting.a doctor walked us and said that nothing seriously had happened and that my friend would recove soon.We were more than happier to hear that.

It was a Saturday evening 改错…………谢谢十处.It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the football.With am important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both wanted to do well at the match .Sudde
It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the(应去掉the) football.With am(应an) important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both(应all) wanted to do well at(应in) the match .Suddenly,one of my friends fell over.I was shocked and run(应ran) towards him.I saw blood on his head.Everyone felt scary(应scaried).After a while,we took him to the nearest hospitals(应hospital).I also called his family to tell them aboutthe accident.When we were sitting and waiting.a(应A) doctor walked(应walked to) us and said that nothing seriously(应serious) had happened and that my friend would recove soon.We were more than happier to hear that.

It was a Saturday evening that(1) my friends and I were playing (2) football.With an important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We all(3) wanted to do well in(4) the match .Sudd...

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It was a Saturday evening that(1) my friends and I were playing (2) football.With an important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We all(3) wanted to do well in(4) the match .Suddenly,one of my friends fell over.I was shocked and ran(5) towards him.I saw blood on his head.Everyone felt scared(6).After a while,we took him to the nearest hospital(7).I also called his family to tell them about the accident.When we were sitting and waiting.a doctor walked to(8)us and said that nothing seriously had happened so(9) that my friend would recove soon.We were very happy(10) to hear that.
第10个若是要用比较级，We were happier to hear that.

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the football——the删掉
do well at——in
scary-scaried
hospitals——hospital
walked后加to
and that删去that
happier——happy

1. playing football，
2. With an important match coming up the following week
3. we all wanted to do well
4. I was shocked and (then) I ran towards him
5. Everyone felt/was scared.
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1. playing football，
2. With an important match coming up the following week
3. we all wanted to do well
4. I was shocked and (then) I ran towards him
5. Everyone felt/was scared.
6. took him to the nearest hospital,
7. a doctor walked to/approached us
8. nothing serious had happened
9. my friend would recover soon
10. we were more than happy

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It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the (1去掉the)football.With am important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both (2.改成all)wanted to do well at (3 改成i...

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It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the (1去掉the)football.With am important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both (2.改成all)wanted to do well at (3 改成in )the match .Suddenly,one of my friends fell over.I (4.改成we)was shocked and run (5.改成ran)towards him.I saw blood on his head.Everyone felt scary (6.改成scared).After a while,we took him to the nearest hospitals(7.改成hospital).I also called his family to tell them about the accident.When we were sitting and waiting.a doctor walked (8.+ to) us and said that nothing seriously(9. 改成serious) had happened and that my friend would recove soon.We were more than happier (10改成happy)to hear that.
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。It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing (1 去掉the ) football.With (2 an)important match(3 to come ) the next week.we decided to practice more .We(4 all b)wanted to do well (5 in )...

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。It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing (1 去掉the ) football.With (2 an)important match(3 to come ) the next week.we decided to practice more .We(4 all b)wanted to do well (5 in ) the match .Suddenly,one of my friends fell over.I was shocked and(6 ran ) towards him.I saw blood on his head.Everyone felt scary.After a while,we took him to the nearest hospitals.I also called his family to tell them about the accident (7 while ) we were sitting and waiting.a doctor walked (8 to )us and said that nothing (9serious ) had happened and that my friend would recove soon.We were more than( 10 happy)to hear that.

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