求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明：李明：高

求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明：李明：高
求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)
假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明：
李明：高个子,戴眼镜 航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
习作
Dear Peter:
How are you doing?My uncle Li Ming will leave for your citiy to attend a meeting.He will bring the Chinese picuture that you want to have for you.The picutre is very beautiful and I think you must like it.I hope you can pick him up at the airport if you have free time.My uncle is very tall with a pair of glasses.The nember of the airport is CA985.He will arrive at your citiy at 11:30 ,Augest 6.Thank you very much.Please write to me if you have some questions.I will tell you at first time.
Yours
Li hua

求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明：李明：高
不才献丑了~修改都用[sample]写了一下..都是文法上的..
Dear Peter:
How are you doing?My uncle Li Ming [will attend a meeting at your city on August].He will [also]bring the Chinese [painting you want for you].The [painting] is very beautiful and I think you [will love] it.I hope you can pick him up at the airport if you [are available].My uncle is very tall [and wears] a pair of glasses.The [flight number] is CA985.He will arrive at [your city airport around]11:30 ,[August] 6.Thank you very much.
[Please write me a reply if you have any question.I will respond as soon as possible]
Yours
Li Hua

你好

1.  He will bring the Chinese picuture that you want to have for you
   

   改为：He will bring you the Chinese picuture that you want.

2. The nember of the airport  is CA985
   改为：The nember of the flight  is CA985 (flight 航班）

3. He will arrive at your citiy at 11:30
   改为：He will arrive in your citiy at 11:30, on Augest 6th(arrive in  + 大地点， arrive at + 小地点，例如 arrive at the airport)

4. Please write to me if you have some questions
   改为：Please write to me if you have any questions (任何问题请联系我，用any)

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He will bring the Chinese picuture that you want to have for you.---He will bring the Chinese picture which you want.
The picutre is very beautiful and I think you must like it---will like it
He will arrive at your citiy at 11:30---He will arrive at 11.30
if you have some questions---any