英语翻译One day ,my mother and I sit around a fire .①【】She told me how she had met my dad .She was worked ②【】in a hospital at that time as nurse .My dad was a ③【】patient whom was being treated in the hospital .There ④【】the

英语翻译One day ,my mother and I sit around a fire .①【】She told me how she had met my dad .She was worked ②【】in a hospital at that time as nurse .My dad was a ③【】patient whom was being treated in the hospital .There ④【】the
英语翻译
One day ,my mother and I sit around a fire .①【】
She told me how she had met my dad .She was worked ②【】
in a hospital at that time as nurse .My dad was a ③【】
patient whom was being treated in the hospital .There ④【】
they met for the first time .My dad was impressed on my ⑤【】
mother at first sight .She took good care of him .By the ⑥【】
time she recovered and got out of the hospital ,they had ⑦【】
got along quite well for each other .She lived in the ⑧【】
countryside ,20 mile from where my dad lived .He rode ⑨【】
a bike to visit to her every week until they got married .⑩【】
原文就是这样,括号代表前面一句话有一个错误的地方.求教啦.我一定给分.

英语翻译One day ,my mother and I sit around a fire .①【】She told me how she had met my dad .She was worked ②【】in a hospital at that time as nurse .My dad was a ③【】patient whom was being treated in the hospital .There ④【】the
更正楼上答案如下：
1.sit 改成 sat
一般过去时
2.worker 改成 working
非被动,而是过去进行时
3.as和nurse中间加入a
nurse是可数名词
4.whom 改成 who
该关系代词在定语从句中坐主语,所用用主格who,不用宾格whom
5.on改成by/with
be impressed by/with...对...印象深刻
6.此行无错
at first sight是固定短语,first前面不必加the
7.she改成he
是他爸爸住院出院
8.for 改成 with
固定短语 get along well with sb,意思是“和某人相处融洽”
9.mile 改成 miles
mile是可数名词
10.去掉to
visit做动词时,是及物动词,其后无须介词就可以直接加宾语her

1,sit改成sat，因为是过去时
2.working，was worked是被动。
3.as a nurse 加a，名词前加a，
4.whom改成who，whom做宾语
5.不用被动，直接用impressed on，给谁留下印象，原文是表被动了
6 at the first sight，要加the 表示第一眼
7she改成he，因为是爸爸生病

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1,sit改成sat，因为是过去时
2.working，was worked是被动。
3.as a nurse 加a，名词前加a，
4.whom改成who，whom做宾语
5.不用被动，直接用impressed on，给谁留下印象，原文是表被动了
6 at the first sight，要加the 表示第一眼
7she改成he，因为是爸爸生病
8.去掉for
9from前加away
10visit之后to去掉，直接加宾语。
原因我不是都写了吗？

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