帮忙修改一下我的日记有没有语法错误以及不地道的表达,I have to finish 4 lap reports tomorrom morning.MY GOD!Today I went to take a passort photo for the IELTS,the cameraman I mean the photographer asked me to wear a dark shirt.

帮忙修改一下我的日记有没有语法错误以及不地道的表达,I have to finish 4 lap reports tomorrom morning.MY GOD!Today I went to take a passort photo for the IELTS,the cameraman I mean the photographer asked me to wear a dark shirt.
帮忙修改一下我的日记有没有语法错误以及不地道的表达,
I have to finish 4 lap reports tomorrom morning.
MY GOD!
Today I went to take a passort photo for the IELTS,the cameraman I mean the photographer asked me to wear a dark shirt.Wooooo...That shirt was really not nice,I really do not like that style but I had no more choice.
I got the photos in the afternoon.As soon as I open that photo bag,I was shocked by the ugly guy in the photo.Haa :)
I am very hungry now.Oh yes,this moring I spent 9 yuan bought a pig's foot,however,it's not delicious.And I gave them to the dog around my dorm.I was happy when seeing he eat them.Ha

帮忙修改一下我的日记有没有语法错误以及不地道的表达,I have to finish 4 lap reports tomorrom morning.MY GOD!Today I went to take a passort photo for the IELTS,the cameraman I mean the photographer asked me to wear a dark shirt.
Today I went to take the passort photo for the IELTS, the cameraman, I mean the photographer asked me to wear a dark shirt. Wooooo... That shirt was really not nice, I really do not like that style but I had no other choice.
I got the photos in the afternoon. As soon as I open that photo bag, I was shocked by the ugly guy in the photo. Haa :)
I am very hungry now. Oh yes, this moring I spent 9 yuan buying a pig's foot, however, it's not delicious. So I gave it to the dog around my dorm. I was happy when seeing he eating it. Ha