SAT语法一道--为什么指代不明?OG08-S10-12Many changes occurred while she was president of the (college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness).(A)college, and they increased its educational quality as well as e

SAT语法一道--为什么指代不明?OG08-S10-12Many changes occurred while she was president of the (college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness).(A)college, and they increased its educational quality as well as e
SAT语法一道--为什么指代不明?
OG08-S10-12
Many changes occurred while she was president of the (college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness).
(A)college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness
(B)college, they both increased the educational quality and effectiveness of the college
(C)college, which both increased its educational quality as well as increased its effectiveness
(D)college; these changes increased its educational quality and effectiveness
(E)college; these changes increased both the educational quality and effectiveness of the college
其中我对AD两个选项有疑问.官方解释是这样的:Choice (A) involves a lack of parallelism and the use of vague pronouns. The two objects of the verb "increased" are not grammatically alike: the pronoun "its" is needed to precede the second object, "effectiveness," as it precedes the first, "educational quality."
Choice (D) involves the use of a vague pronoun. The meaning of the sentence would be clearer if the pronoun "its" were replaced by a possessive noun, "the college's."
1. 不知道AD怎么vague了
2. A中increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness非要加its才平行吗?
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SAT语法一道--为什么指代不明?OG08-S10-12Many changes occurred while she was president of the (college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness).(A)college, and they increased its educational quality as well as e
AD都没有明确指出it代指的是college,虽然也不能算错,太多介词让句子不太清晰加个college更好,所以有college的选项就选better的

你知道
A中increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness非要加its才平行
了吗？
我也有这个困惑！而且为什么as well as换成and就不用加its了？

SAT里面是很不喜欢代词，比如they, it等单独出现的，因为指代不明。一般都是一个代词和一个具体指代的名词一起出现，所以像E“ these changes"这样的比较好，所以A,B都可以排除掉
D中its也是指代不明，所以E里面把its换成了"of the college"，指代就明确了
这样解释清楚了吗？...

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SAT里面是很不喜欢代词，比如they, it等单独出现的，因为指代不明。一般都是一个代词和一个具体指代的名词一起出现，所以像E“ these changes"这样的比较好，所以A,B都可以排除掉
D中its也是指代不明，所以E里面把its换成了"of the college"，指代就明确了
这样解释清楚了吗？

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首先as well as绝对是不简洁的，这个选项一定错误。
其次，你发现了么，the president of the college.A of B，主语是A呀，如果是its的话，it并不指代的是college，因为前文的主语是president呀，of the college是修饰成分，所以有必要重现，否则会认为是increased the president's educational...

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首先as well as绝对是不简洁的，这个选项一定错误。
其次，你发现了么，the president of the college.A of B，主语是A呀，如果是its的话，it并不指代的是college，因为前文的主语是president呀，of the college是修饰成分，所以有必要重现，否则会认为是increased the president's educational...........

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