这句话有没有问题?有没有什么语法错误?Staring at the twinkled stars in the sky,I wish my hope of helping people in poverty can be like a star,enlightening others’ skies.

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这句话有没有问题?有没有什么语法错误?Staring at the twinkled stars in the sky,I wish my hope of helping people in poverty can be like a star,enlightening others’ skies.
这句话有没有问题?有没有什么语法错误?
Staring at the twinkled stars in the sky,I wish my hope of helping people in poverty can be like a star,enlightening others’ skies.

这句话有没有问题?有没有什么语法错误?Staring at the twinkled stars in the sky,I wish my hope of helping people in poverty can be like a star,enlightening others’ skies.
有的.wish后面的意思是虚拟的,其(助)动词必须是过去式,所以can要更正为could.

有错,twinkle stars 就好了,而且可以简单些。I wish my hope of helping people in poverty is like a star, enlightening their sky.

基本上没有什么语法错误

twinkled --->twinkle

很优美的句子,我觉得没有错误