this‘s Alan and that's jim两处错误 those are her grandparent两处错误 her family is chinese两处错误还有here your watch is两处错误

this‘s Alan and that's jim两处错误 those are her grandparent两处错误 her family is chinese两处错误还有here your watch is两处错误
this‘s Alan and that's jim两处错误 those are her grandparent两处错误 her family is chinese两处错误
还有here your watch is两处错误

this‘s Alan and that's jim两处错误 those are her grandparent两处错误 her family is chinese两处错误还有here your watch is两处错误
This isAlan and that's Jim.
Those are her grandparents.
Her families are Chinese.

Alan's Jim's

grandparents

from china

here is your watch或者your watch is here

1.开头字母要大写，jim中j也要大写。2开头字母要大写，those改成they。3.开头字母大写，is改成are。很高兴能够帮助你。

正确：this is Alan and that's Jim
those are her grandparents或 that is her grandparent
her family are Chinese 因为family此处为家人的意思，表复数概念

this's不能缩写，是this is；jim人名首字母要大写。

grandparent加复数词尾s，此外没有看到错误，除非是句首大写，但你别的也没有大写。或者的可能是联系前后文，her用错了，但没有前后文，不知道应该怎么改。

is换成are，因为family是集合名词，表示多个人；chinese专有名词首字母大写。

这句应该是Here ...

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this's不能缩写，是this is；jim人名首字母要大写。

grandparent加复数词尾s，此外没有看到错误，除非是句首大写，但你别的也没有大写。或者的可能是联系前后文，her用错了，但没有前后文，不知道应该怎么改。

is换成are，因为family是集合名词，表示多个人；chinese专有名词首字母大写。

这句应该是Here is your watch，不存在几处错误的问题。

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