求英语大神帮修改作文The biggest problem we faced todayWe ,here,means the generation of us .Thus ,I think,the biggest problem we faced today is future .Future is a big word.In our childhood,we always think wildly about our future ,of our car

求英语大神帮修改作文The biggest problem we faced todayWe ,here,means the generation of us .Thus ,I think,the biggest problem we faced today is future .Future is a big word.In our childhood,we always think wildly about our future ,of our car
求英语大神帮修改作文
The biggest problem we faced today
We ,here,means the generation of us .Thus ,I think,the biggest problem we faced today is future .
Future is a big word.In our childhood,we always think wildly about our future ,of our career ,the world,ourself mostly about our appearance.But this kind of abundant dreams fade out into confusion,our future become dense fog.
Sure,those who are clear of what they want ,are of great fortune.However,I believe a great proportion of us have ever been through the dilemma when filling out the college application.You will find yourself humble in front of the application book.You will find there is always better choice beyond your marks ,those your marks are handsome enough.Even those know what they want are struggle with at lease two choice,like,which school to go to,which major to choose.
After a two-month vacation,the confusion start over.We start to wonder what we can do when we finished the four-year major.Let alone supporting our parent and sever our country ,we may not even make a living ourselves.Together with the busy of freshmen life,we are in a greater loss.
Actually we don’t have to think that much ,just obey the kiss principle ,live a meaningful life.Learning a skill ,making a friend are possible to let go of our loss.No one can get away with troubles ,they are sure to come .Only if we are strong enough,that can be solved

求英语大神帮修改作文The biggest problem we faced todayWe ,here,means the generation of us .Thus ,I think,the biggest problem we faced today is future .Future is a big word.In our childhood,we always think wildly about our future ,of our car
几处小的语法错误和建议1.ourself 是复数吧2.become 单三吧3.struggle现在进行时4.单复数不知是打错了还是怎样,稍有混乱5.用了大量的定语从句,其他句式则稍显单薄