We would be confident in that our products will help you expand your market 错在那里?
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We would be confident in that our products will help you expand your market 错在那里?
We would be confident in that our products will help you expand your market 错在那里?
We would be confident in that our products will help you expand your market 错在那里?
问题表述不全面.如果单是这么一句话,应该不算错.
in that 表示"由于,因为,既然"等引导的意思.
would be而没用are,表示一种假设.在后面那个条件成立后我们会怎么样.
但是这句话说的有点别扭.如果你要表达"我们的产品会有助于贵司开拓市场,对这一点我们很自信",似乎应该说:we are confident that our products will help you expand your market.这样说才有信服力.LZ的说法让对方觉得你说那句话时底气不足,特心虚.
应修改为:We are confident that our products will help you to expand your market.注:confident 后可直接接that从句,不需要加介词 in 了。
would be应该用will be吧。这里需要反人称马。用are也可以
in that 是正确的。这里的in that是引导原因状语从句表示因为把
We should,,,,, help you to expand
would的客气语气和这句话不协调,help之后expand是动词。
我们对自己的产品能帮助你开拓市场充满信心。