短文改错英语,共十处My best friend are my classmate Jack.We always do everything together and play for same soccer team.One day last year we had a terrible quarrel after we lose.Jack told me I had played badly,what made me very madly.I walked

短文改错英语,共十处My best friend are my classmate Jack.We always do everything together and play for same soccer team.One day last year we had a terrible quarrel after we lose.Jack told me I had played badly,what made me very madly.I walked
短文改错英语,共十处
My best friend are my classmate Jack.We always do everything together and play for same soccer team.
One day last year we had a terrible quarrel after we lose.Jack told me I had played badly,what made me very madly.I walked away and didn’t speak to Jack at more than a week; I even ignored him in class.
Finally,another classmates told me Jack was very sad about our quarrel,which made me relize I should be the one to apologize to so I did..
Sometimes our friends tell us things we don’t like but they are only
trying to helping us and we should be grateful to him.Jack was right.I did play badly.

短文改错英语,共十处My best friend are my classmate Jack.We always do everything together and play for same soccer team.One day last year we had a terrible quarrel after we lose.Jack told me I had played badly,what made me very madly.I walked
are改成is same前加the lose改成lost what改成which at去掉 classmates/classmate 第二个to去掉 tells/tell helping/help him/them

My best friend IS my classmate....for THE same soccer team....we LOST...,WHICH made me very MAD..FOR more than a week...classmate...REALIZE THAT.....apologize AND SO I DID...they are JUST trying....be grateful to THEM....
修改见上面的大写单词

My best friend is my classmate Jack.
the same soccer team
after we lost
what made me mad
any more
for a week;
another classmate
made me realize
for what I did
trying to help

on her foot:in her foot
has competed:had cpmpeted
thought of:去掉of
minds：mind
offer：give
so：but
giving：given
particular：too
he：she
hard：harder
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are--is；same前加the；lose--lost；what--which；madly--mad；at--for；classmates---classmate；to去掉；helping--help；him--them