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篇一:How to Keep Safe in School

How to Keep Safe in School

By Willen Zhang, Class 10 Grade 9

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, in last school sports meeting, something bad happened to Tom during the competition. He ran so fast that he can’t stop at all and then fell down. At last his arms were broken and he had to stay in hospital for a mouth. So we should pay more attention to our safety when playing sports. For example, we shouldn’t run fast on the wet playground. Also, I think we should get more educations from school about protecting ourselves. We should learn the importance of keeping safe and the skills of it.

We can’t have a happy life in school unless we are safe. So let’s take care to keep ourselves safe in school!

篇二:How to Keep Safe in School

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerours if we are not careful enough? For example,oneday,two students ran after each other int he hallway. Suddenly, one of then fell down and hurt his fet because of the wet floor. This fore he had to stay in hospotal for two weeks. So I Ithink students should always walk but not run in the hallway. And the teachers had better keep an eye on students after class and stop them from running.At last,I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school. 作者能很好的关注生活中的安全隐患,并能和大家分享的精神值得褒奖。整体文章句式丰富,但个别表达可以更地道\更生动些。如it caused him have to stay in hospital. we should walk instead of running .尚需注意写

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2. oneday改为 one day

two students ran after each other in the hallway.注意每句话之间要空格,注意检查细节。

3.Fet改为feet.

4. This fore he had to stay in hospotal for two weeks. 改为This caused that he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.

5. So I Ithink students should always walk but not run in the hallway. 该为

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1. one day

2.This caused that he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.

3. So I think students should always walk instead of running in the hallway.

点 评

作者能很好的关注生活中的安全隐患,并能和大家分享的精神值得褒奖。整体文章句式丰富,但个别表达可以更地道\更生动些。如it caused him have to stay in hospital. we should walk instead of running .尚需注意写拼写细节和符号细节。

给 分 理 由

整体文章句式丰富,叙事条理清楚但个别表达不够地道如it caused him have to stay in hospital. we should walk instead of running ,因此扣分8分。拼写细节和符号问题扣分2分,总分90分

篇三:How to keep safe___如何保持安全 保护自身 火灾 地震 学校 生活

整理近年来保护___安全的作文:有兴趣的请下载

How to keep safe?

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First, you have to be careful about the persons you want to make friends with especially online friends . Not everyone around you is friendly to you . Second,if you are in danger ,you should call the police for help as soon as possible. Because you ought to be protected safely before being done harm to by the bad man. Also ,it is very important for us to eat healthily bad safely .Don’t eat food that has gone bad. Last but not least ,we should pay more attention to the traffic ,we aren’t allowed to swim in the rivers or swim outside alone without permission.

广东省中考英语作文)

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough ? For

example,last month,three children ran after each other fast on the playground.One of children hurt his leg.And he stayed in hospital for a week. From this story,I want to give some suggestions to every student and teacher.I think students should walk but not run on the playground or in the

hallway.The teachers should take good care of their students and prevent them from running.In the end, I'm sure that everybody will pay attention to their safety at school.

It’s important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live more happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.

First, be in order when we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. It’s helpful to us.

If we follow the advice, we’ll make ourselves safe at school.

It's important for us to keep safe on the road. There are many buses, cars and people on the roads. The roads are very busy. To keep ourselves safe, we must follow the traffic rules.

First, walk or ride on the right side of the road. Make sure it’s safe when you across the road. Second, never play on the road, it's dangerous. Third, keep in order when you take a bus. If we do like these, we'll be safe on the road.

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How to keep safe when an earthquake happens?

It's important for us to keep safe when an earthquake happens.We should pay attention to the following:

Firstly, we must keep quiet, and then move to a safe location quickly, such as under the hard tables.Secondly, we should protect our faces and heads with hands or other soft things.Thirdly, when the shake stops surely, we should run out as soon as possible and try to be far away from buildings.If you are outside, remember to keep away from tall buildings.Last but not the least, don't take the elevator at this moment.

How to protect yourself in a fire

Many fires happen in China every year.Many people are hurt or die in the fire.Knowing some ways to protect yourself wil help to keep safe in the fire.

When a fire happens, remember,the most important thing is to stay calm. You should call 119 at once.If the fire isnot very serious, Turn off all the lights and gas. Find some clothes and make them wet. Put on the wet clothes, cover your face and run out of the building. Donot jump out of the window or take a lift. It is dangerous. If you cannot run out of the room, remember the safest place is close to water, like washroom..

Remember these suggestions above, you must protect yourself from a fire.

篇四:How to keep safe in a stampede

How to keep safe in a stampede

In recent years, many stampedes happened. Many people got hurt or even killed because the stampedes. As we all know, a stampede may happen at school,too. Therefore, how can we keep safe in a stampede?

Here are some of my ideas: First, we should keep away from the crowd and don’t go to the crowded places. Second, if we are in a stampede, we should try our best to get to the safe places quickly. Third, when we are in a crowd, try not to run, or you will fall down and get hurt. Finally, you should walk in the same direction with other people and try to avoid falling down. In a word, wherever you go, safety must come first.

篇五:How_to_Keep_Safe_in_School-cai

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, in last school sports meeting, something bad happened to Tom during the competition. He ran so fast that he can’t stop at all and then fell down. At last his arms were broken and he had to stay in hospital for a month. So we should pay more attention to our safety in school.

In my opinion, we shouldn’t run fast on the wet playground. Also, I think we should follow the teachers advice when we are having a P.E.class.We had better not throw anything out of the window.We should be careful when we go downstairs.We had better not climb the wall in the school.

We can’t have a happy life in school unless we are safe. So let’s take care and keep ourselves safe in school!

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